Sales Page Review: Kreativagentur für 999 Dollar im Monat

0:01Unternehmer/Gast If I'm moving fast, then uh just uh pay attention fast. All right, so uh winning crazy. First off, love the first the first visual here. Really really love the first visual. Really pops. Um very uh looks a little inspired uh by some anime trends. Um but I will say this, uh just give me more. If you have winning creatives, give me six other ones, but make them all different, right? Make them make them different for different genres or different industries. Let's see. One of the hardest parts getting community in the published ads. Okay. Um with a budget can't guarantee return.

0:37Alex Um okay. Proven to us 30 ad accounts. Okay. Here's what we offer. What you get. Okay. I would I would either choose here's what we here's what you get or here's what we offer. Just pick one. Uh 20 ads creative. Um two weekly calls June bonus full community audit. Special pricing. Okay. Okay. So, I would put uh the pricing thing up top if you're going to bump it. Um I would put the June bonus up top. Uh I would then probably see if I could put this into single lines and see what I could cut. Um and then the what you get monthly. Uh I would take away these these uh these trophies because they kind for me they kind of distract. That's just me personally. So that's a that's a bit of a a personal bias there. Um, and again, if we're doing 20 ad creatives, then just give give as max versions of creatives and like with each of them uh like here you have four like see if you could do like like each one of them has four so you can show more of them because people are like wow these are really good, right? Uh you just want to blow people away with this and it's like imagine if you had ads like this running all the time that you didn't have to work for. Well, we're going to give you 20 of these every month. We're going to give you two weekly shadow class. one one screenshot of you reviewing creative with somebody else on the line. So, it's you and somebody else in a screen share or you in a group in a screen share like this like what we're doing right now.

1:56Alex I'd have a screenshot of this call um in there. And I would if you can this would be like for sure show I mean if you could you could and again guys you can use one tile and show four before and afters or two before and afters at least. So you say add creative uh before add creative with us add creative before add creative with us. So, it's like here's the creative, which people are like, wow, that slays. And then they're like, but does it work? So, that's gonna be the next natural question that I'd have as a consumer. And then you say, don't worry, I've got that resolved. It works. And then you show the how we work together, which is like, okay, but how does it work? And then it's like, great, there's a picture of me. There's a picture of uh, you know, the person and them working on the ad. We want to show kind of like the full 360 of what the client experience will look like for them because then also the the better the client experience matches um what they were promised, then the more congruency you're going to have overall, the more people are going to stay, the more people going to refer and the like fundamentally they're just going to they're going to keep buying because they're getting exactly what they wanted. Um I like the money back guarantee. I would I would just consider Okay, because Okay, now that we're look sorry, let me pull this back up because I'm talking at you. So, if I were to redo this page, I would probably put all three of these things as one. Basically, it's like June special. It says bonus community audit uh 14-day money back guarantee now only $9.99. So, that just takes these six lines, makes it into three, puts at the top. I would take this thing um and I don't even know if I would I would maybe put this at the end.

3:32Alex I would put this next as like what are the features and then if people want to find out more I put the last bullets kind of describing stuff inside of it with like proof that I am good at what I say I do and I would see if I can like if you had to cut this into a third what would you do and how many words would you eliminate? Um, that's that's probably what I would and you if you want you can even give them a separate CTA which is like if you've got questions go here, right? Which I think that might be a good especially if this this is high ticket.

4:01Alex I would say uh if you have any questions DM me and this is my profile or whatever because that way I think it'll make it a lot easier for you to close other people that will be like on the fence. Um, so this probably goes for low ticket guys too, but especially high ticket where, you know, one sale or two more sales a month at at 1K will make a material difference in terms of your income over a year. It's like $24,000.