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0:00International Hustlers Academy. Um, okay. Let's look here. T20 strategies for International. So, one thing I will say because I actually saw this somewhere. I saw this group. Yeah. So, 375. One thing I'm only I'm only going to say this. I'm pretty sure Tate's thing is called Hustler. I was Hustler University, right? So, if you want that association, then keep it. If this has nothing to do with that, to me, it's a little confusing. That's like my the first thing that I saw when I thought that when I saw this was Tate and I thought this was a Tateesque comedian. Now, if it is, then fine. I just don't know if that's the intention. When I read what it was for, it didn't seem like it was that way. Um, so I would consider using like driven or hungry or ambitious.

0:41Ambitious Academy actually sounds kind of nice. Little alliteration there. Um, and so I would just consider that. That's just like that's just me shooting from the cuff. If you don't want to change it up to you can do whatever you want. Okay, so we've got a lot of videos here. Let's let's go through uh this this first guy. Okay, so this looks like you've got changing visuals. I like this presentation. This looks good. Okay, this is good. I like this presentation. Great.

1:06Yep. I like this presentation. Okay, let's see what this guy is. Okay, so these are Okay, these are testimonials. Okay. Um Okay, so Okay, I by the way, the first the first line in that video says, "Congrats on the job." which I think is [ __ ] banger, really good. And so what I would probably try and do, so this is me going marketing 2011 hat. Obviously you're making some money with this right now, which is awesome. I would try and take that congrats on your job part and take it from every one of the calls that you had and condense it into one and do like 60 in a row and it's like congrats on the job. Congrats on the job. Congrats on the job. Congrats on the job. Congrats on the job. Congrats on the job. Right? People like holy [ __ ] Right? And I would probably start the video with uh 60 stories in 60 seconds because that way I know what I'm about to get when I click. So just this is like YouTube 101. This is kind of creator 101. It's like what am I like? I want to bargain on my time. I want to make sure it's worth it. So it's like 60 seconds. Okay, I'll I'll watch 60 stories in 60 seconds. Cool. Click. All right. Um and as you see the contrast on the job, just put in the lower third what the job was. So you don't have to wait for it to get said. be like Najie got uh you know a roll 90K at you know whatever credit Swiss whatever doesn't matter all right and so you just you pop through that I think that would be really compelling and then I would probably still use the other carousels to show features of the plan that you literally just take screenshots of the presentation that you had the most compelling slides just take those screenshots and u and put them in there because believe it or not you can also put a lower third on that slide say if you want the voiceover watch the Yeah.

2:47So that way it's like you can let the slides sell me on watching your video because your video looks like it's it's relatively compelling just just sliding through it. So I would I would take I would take screenshots of the of the most compelling slides, put those as the remainder of the carousels and reference back to the video so that I might get someone to watch it, be more likely to buy. Okay. So now we're going to look at the copy because this is how this is how people this is how people go through these things. All right. Price goes up.

3:11Cool. So this is nice. A little urgency right off the bat. Oh. Um, I think you might have to update this if you've already made already made the jump. Um, as a side note. Okay. Struggling to land a job. You're not alone. Okay. Success story hundreds. Okay, cool. Master Restep. It's fine. In May, you unlock. Okay. So, we want to make sure that Okay, this is in May. Um, daily live calls.

3:33Okay. Exclusive community access 11 hour course. Okay, cool. Uh, proven templates for a limited time offer. I think more or le this is this is this is like I think the I think the copy here is pretty is pretty good. You know I mean I think these this covers a lot of the main points. I would update this because this feels a little unclear but otherwise I think this is this is pretty solid. This is a very compelling offer as a side note just for everybody like um which shows which is why he has the number of member he has the price point like this is a very big promise. Um and actually let's see here you kind of have the promise here. I would experiment. So this is a test.

4:12This is one I would probably consider running as a test of having the big bold promise as slide one and then have video as slide two car like testimonial banger slide three and then I think do we have six? Is that what it is Kirby? >> And then the other three I would have my most three compelling slides for my presentation that reference back to the video. That's that's how I would probably lay this out. And then my my big my big frontend slide would probably be headline sub headline. So, it' probably be um like get let's see here um get or land a UK job in 90 days as an international student.

4:56That's what it is. And then probably the underneath is like even if all my biggest concerns, which you know them better than I do.